Senior Pitch Critique

Maybe I was unclear about certain aspects of my Senior Show pitch, during class last Thursday. Below I have posted a few production package items: Storyboards, Script Analysis, Characters, etc. This production is very personal and my goal is to inform people of how I use the Holy Bible to navigate through life. And yes, this college experience has played an important part in my life. My target audience is EVERYBODY. This film is for all people (Elders, Christians, Children, Atheist, Teens, etc.) to hopefully get something from it, whether it be a negative or positive response. Dependent upon the viewer, it will be interpreted several ways. I chose Barbie's to film because I knew I could illustrate my concept accurately using human characteristics, and I would be in control of MY camera. Hopefully, this post will clear up any misunderstandings about my IDEA! Leave comments PLEASE!!